I need help completing a section of my paper.. I have attached my chapter 2 and my draft of the section below.. The section I am needing revised is the highlighted portion of the document.

My instructor stated:

You are still using this ‘old source’. I recommend using the sources from Chapter 2 – you do not need any new sources here and I know it is redundant but that is okay to repeat yourself a bit for the reader to clearly understand that this was an evidence based project that bridged a gap in the orientation process. You only need a couple of strong paragraphs here. You identified a problem -> that orientation practices were unorganized and inconsistent. You developed an orientation checklist to bridge this gap. The orientation checklist that you created was informed by evidence from the research literature to bridge the gap that you identified. Cite 2-3 key studies from chapter 2 that support the decision to develop the checklist.

For example, (note how I have identified numerous sources within the same sentence and paragraph).

This project applied best practice recommendations from the research literature to bridge the gap in the current orientation process with an evidence-based solution that improves the orientation experience for newly hired nurses. Orientation programs are complex because they help to socialize newly hired nurses to the team (source, year), familiarize them with the workplace (source year), and provide protected time where they become integrated into the work processes of the organization (Source, year). Orientation checklists facilitate a comprehensive program that supports the needs of the orientee (Source, year), improves communication with the preceptor (source, year), and validates consistent orientation processes across the organization (source, year).