Base on instruction, help me to modify the first draft paper. ( Need to add two or three sentences about What was learned from this earthquake? What were the long-term impacts of this earthquake? Is it likely to occur again? why we need to study this earthquake?)

This is the Instruction:

(no plagiarism, paper should be 1500-1600 words, no more than 1600 words, APA style)

Topic: 1906 San Francisco Earthquake

As this is a course in environmental geology, you will need to address the geologic aspects of the earthquake as well as the effects that the event had on people.Some questions you should consider, but are certainly not limited to are:

Geologic aspects:

When and where did it occur?

What type of plate boundary did it occur at (the tectonic setting)?

Focal depth

The fault that the event occurred on (which may have a name separate from the plate boundary)

The amount of displacement and length of rupture

The frequency of earthquakes in the region,

The magnitude and/or intensity of the earthquake

Any other geologically pertinent information

Effects on people:

The hazards associated with the quake (e.g.- liquefaction, fires, landslides, etc.)

The damage that ensued

If the earthquake was particularly destructive, why was this the case? If not, what was responsible for minimizing destruction (e.g. it was in a remote location, it had a small magnitude, structures were earthquake resistant, most structures were on stable bedrock, etc.)

What was learned from this earthquake? What were the long-term impacts of this earthquake? Is it likely to occur again?

What were the social and financial impacts? Global impacts? Contributions to science? Contributions to new warning systems, earthquake codes, etc.?