I have already made the first draft and I have it revised I need help with the corrections. The orginal paper is uploaded as a doc. The revised is uploaded as a PDF.

The topic was:

Select a notable mythologicalfigure such as Athena. Research and report on the different ways in which he orshe is represented visually in media such as sculpture or painting. Does themanner of representation change over time? Which episodes from your figure'slife are represented most frequently? This paper should have a diachronicperspective—i.e., examine visual representations fromseveral artistic periods, such as Hellenistic,Medieval, Renaissance, Baroque, etc.

The provided instructions bellow were used for the paper:

-The research paper is to be 1800-2400 words long

– please read the uploaded docs carefully before writing the assignment.

– no plagiarism.

– in the dock there is a way to show you how to source your sources for this paper.

– No fake sources I will be checking the sources and if the writing matches or not.

– credible and English sources only

primary sources as discussed in the doc can be the following

1- Hesiod’s Theogony

2- Apollodorus’ Library

3- Hyginus’ Fabulae,

4-Ovid’s Metamorphoses

5- ,and/or the Bible, as appropriate for the topic

If you would like to use Euripides’ Medea, a perfectly fine translation by C.A.E. Luschnig is available at http://www.stoa.org/diotima/anthology/medea.trans.shtml.

not: other primary sources can be use if they are only credible