Essay Rubric
Essay Rubric
Criteria Ratings Pts
Organization/attention to mode and assignment

Organization is the physical structure of your paper, including the way you group those original ideas. If you have organizational issues, I mark the areas in which you're struggling and try to give you advice. Attention to mode means exactly that: if we are writing a narrative, as in essay 2, you use narrative tactics and tell a story. If we are writing in process mode, you show the steps of the process. And so on. Attention to the assignment is also pretty clear. It means that, if I've asked you to write in a certain mode about a certain topic, you do that. If I ask you to include no outside information or sourced material, you go with that instruction.

2.5 pts

Full Marks

0.0 pts

No Marks
2.5 pts
Ideas/Thinking

I expect you to do your prewriting and think fresh, original thoughts, thoughts that are unique to you and your experience. If you've plagiarized your work, you get a zero in this area.

2.5 pts

Full Marks

0.0 pts

No Marks
2.5 pts
Style and Diction

Diction is simply word choice. If you have issues finding the best word to express your thoughts, again, I will point that out and make suggestions. Some students make bad diction choices when they use a thesaurus to try and make their writing sound more sophisticated. Please don't use a thesaurus. Instead, increase your active vocabulary by READING MORE. Style is really about the sophistication of your expression. If you have awkward expression, or if you write the way you speak, I will mark you out on style.

2.5 pts

Full Marks

0.0 pts

No Marks
2.5 pts
Mechanics

These are nagging concerns such as commas, comma splices, run on sentences, spelling, and apostrophe issues. I do mark these issues in at least half of your essays each time. You can look into the online handbook for rules (and remedies).

2.5 pts

Full Marks

0.0 pts

No Marks
2.5 pts
Total Points: 10.0

After you write your descriptive essay, take 100-150 words to answer these questions:

  • What is strongest in my essay? (What am I proudest of?)
  • What are my areas of weakness in this essay? What do I need to work on as I continue writing essays?
  • What would I change if I had another week to improve or revise this essay?
  • What did I learn from writing this essay that I'll bring to my future essays?