The sentences or paragraphs below lack clarity, precision, directness, and balance. Please rewrite them to solve these problems. Type the revised sentence or paragraph underneath the original.

a. The purpose of this report is to offer the State of Ohio ways and resources to assist those in charge of developing procedures to increase the effective utilization of computer-based information system.

b. Beginning management accountants may often advance to chief plant accountant, chief cost accounting, budget director, or manager of internal auditing though starting as ledger accountants, junior internal auditors, or trainees for technical accounting positions with salaries just as good as engineers starting out.

c. It is concluded that the use of flexitime scheduling by companies will continue to bring about an increase in productivity by increasing employee morale and job satisfaction, the quality of labor, organization of work, and less absenteeism. Although drawbacks were mentioned about flexitime scheduling the rate of success and positive points clearly outnumber the problems or drawbacks. We will continue to see flexitime scheduling in the future because young workers of today want individual say and input into the company and by implementing flexitime scheduling this will be made possible.

d. On any given day, one can turn on the "idiot tube" (television) and be assaulted by any number of twenty- to sixty-second messages and longer which preach of the unfulfillment in our life because the lack of a specific product or service.

e. Adults, humans who have accrued a certain number of years of existence, must do all that they can to inform children in the area of sexual behavior and protect them from future problems.

f. As you requested here is the report on the problems faced by book and clothing buyers of retail and wholesale firms. These buyers also provided me with a number of solutions to these problems. I have included them also, as you requested. This paper will be limited to the major problems of book and clothing buyers and will not include specific details of individual situations faced by book and clothing buyers such as the management situation at their firms.

g. A clothing buyer must be able to work together with her store-department coordinators. The buyer should show them how to coordinate outfits for display. The perspective customer needs to know how the outfits go together. A clothing buyer spends a great deal of time working on advertisements for the items he has purchased. People need pictures to entice them to buy clothes if they're expensive, so the buyer must work up lay-outs of the different items he has purchased. He or she should also work up layouts for the floor of the store.

h. A 20 milliamp (ma) signal shall be available to control the additive system pumps from the control panel, automatically, or with a manual override.

i. A surgically implanted device devised to normalize the rhythm of a patient’s failing heart will significantly reduce the death of high risk cardiac patients is called an implantable automatic defibrillator because it prevents sudden death caused by VA's (ventricular arrhythmias), which are rapid erratic heartbeats that cripple the heart.

j. Each pump's fabrication shall consist of ASTM 316 stainless steel where in direct

contact with chemical additives and all piping connections shall be flanged to conform to ANSI Standard B16.5.to joint with interface connections.

The following sentences contain errors in spelling, punctuation, verb and pronoun agreement, sentence structure (fragments and run-ons), and modification. Some, not all, of the underlined words show errors. Please type the correct the errors and submit online.

Example

When you recievethe salary increase, yourfamily will celebrate the occasion.

recieve should be spelled receive

occasion should be occasion

Quiz

1. Each department manager should tell hissubordinates to adviseof any negative occurrences regarding in-housetraining.

2. The lawyers’new offices were similar to theirformer ones____the offices were on a quietstreet.

3. New York City is dividedinto five boroughs ;Manhattan, the Bronx, Queens, Brooklyn, andStaten Island.

4. Fashion consultants explain that clothescreate a strong impression___so they advise executives___ to choosewardrobes carefully.

5. Everyone should make sure that thev arewell represented in union meetings;otherwise,management could become toopowerful.

6.The employment agency,toobusy to return the telephone calls from prospective clients,are harming business opportunities.

7. The supervisory staff aremaking decisions based on scheduling. but all employeeswant to ensurequality control.

8. Because the price of cars has risen dramatically___most people keep their cars longer___to save capital expenditures.

9. The department'smanager heard that a merger was possible___but he decided tokeep the news quiet.

10. The manager of the department believed that her employee'swere excellent,but she decided that no raises could be given___because the price of stocks was falling.

11. The detailed report from the audit___of the department gave good adviseabout how to restructure.so we are all readyto do so.

12. When my boss and Ilooked at the books.we found these problems;lost invoices, unpaid bills.and late payments.

13. The most dedicated staff members areacceptedfor the on-site training sessions because ; they are responsive to criticism, represent the company'sfuture, and strive for improvements.

14. Despite her assurances to the contrary.there isstill three unanswered questions:who will make the payments, when will these payments occur, and why is therea delay?

15. The reputation of many companiesoften dependon one employee whorepresentsthat company.

16. Either my monthly activity report or my year-endreport aredue today.but my computer is broken therefore, I need to use yours.

17. Today's American manpower. according to many foreigngovernments, suffersfrom lack of discipline.

18. Rates are increasing next year because; fuel, maintenance,and insurance areall higher than last year.

19. Many colleges have long-standingfootball rivalries,one of the most famous ones isbetween KU and KSU (two universities in Kansas).

20. Everyonewho wantsto enroll in the business school should do so before June if theycan to ensure getting the best classes.

21. Because John wanted high visibility for his two businesses,he paid top dollar___and spent long hours looking for appropriate cites.

22. Many people apply for jobs at Apex,however.only a few areaccepted.

23. Because most cars break down occasionally,all drivers should know how to change a flat tire .and how to signal for assistance.

24. Arriving on time, working diligentlv, and closing the office securely– everyone needsto know that they areresponsible for these job duties.

25. Mark McGwire not only hit the ball furtherthanother players, but also he hit more dingers than other players whohit fewerhomers.